Poetry Corner
November 29, 2020
there were constellations in her eyes
and they gleamed to my surprise
they have been dark for so long,
I often wondered what went wrong.
I asked her what changed
for she smiled and replied
I finally feel alive.
About the Writer
Ashley Matias Lopez, Reporter
Ashley Matias Lopez is now a senior at Selma High School. This is her first year in Clarion because of her passion for writing and utilizing it as a tool...
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sakshi • Dec 2, 2020 at 9:29 pm
Stop. I LOVE THIS. the way you added extra personality and more depth by simply not punctuating or capitalizing.
Sydney Harrell • Dec 2, 2020 at 2:50 pm
this was so great! i loved the imagery of the stars in this and how the subject was shown through it to have found happiness again. It was super sweet!
Ari Matias • Dec 2, 2020 at 2:16 pm
I loved this!!!! I loved the storyline of a girl who finally found happiness after so long. It’s also interesting how this is the point of view of someone who knew her before her happiness!
chloe • Nov 30, 2020 at 2:01 pm
shut up i love this. i am intrigued by galactic imagery of constellations and space. this sounds like something i would cry to on tumblr. love it